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Scattering of an Idea- Writing by *curran:iconcurran:


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Submitted: May 13, 2003
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This is my entry for the Hidden Qualities contest, and my first contest submission to DA. Just a little poem that I came up with after reading over the rules. I think the poem and flower mixture works well with the overall message, art to me really is scattering ideas to the wind and letting them grow.

Big big thanks to ~princepoo for granting me permission to use his picture, even though he didn't need to. I love this piece, it fits so well with a poem in general. But outside of that, here is the poem:

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Scattering of an Idea


Bursting from a bulging fruit
Seeds scatter into the winds
Rolling, dropping, carried or tossed
They find their paths out into the world
Little bundles of hope

Some will fall early
Perhaps eaten for strength,
Tossed into sterile dirt,
Drowned in seas of endless blue
Or crushed under a careless boot

A few might last longer
But experience a short end
Barely taking root
Before swept away again

To the few that remain things are no better
Pushing up through what little host they have
Creating the first delicate shoots of life
The first tangles of growth seen as a pest
And cut away before it can cause more damage

Time will pass
Winds will blow
Storms will batter the little shoot
Massive feet will stomp down
It will be kicked and pummeled
Too much of a pest to be nurtured

Strengthened by damage
And fueled by storms
A select few continue to grow
Gathering strength to push them higher
Defying all odds
And shattering the limits

Perhaps one little seed will make it this far
The only member of an exclusive club
But when its petals open and its colors are true
The seed transcends the world
And becomes Art

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OUGG.... I hardly understand poems in spanish... this level lexic is too complex for me man LOL

but I'm glad u're writnig more pieces. ^__^

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very...very....VERY good!! Jawdrop i love all the analogies and such w00t! i hope you win!!!! {parts kinda reminded me of the parable of the sower and the seeds....you ever heard??} GREAT job!!

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You're morbid...in a good way. :D
Really good. I feel like the seed being stomped on by a boot right now. Hope ya win the contest! ^_^

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very nice... thank you again for choosing my piece.

very clean extended metaphor. some lines feel long, but its tied all together neatly and artistically. great job, good luck to both of us hehehehe...

I'm currently working on someting else which... interestingly enough, will probably go with the poem better. We'll see though...

baibai
Clap wooow!!! i really hope you win!! it's a lovely piece of writing! good luck!
sounds good to me, nice metaphor. but the person you were crediting for the pic din' show up.. least not for me ._.;

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curran, Clap nice piece and nice metaphor. i don't really know what else to say, except nice work. it's inspiring, really.
interesting... i'm not a huge fan of poetry however so i can't judge this very well, but still interesting...

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